Mrs Walters gave us a task on WTE, It was a moment in time. We had to write about something we did this week. It had to be 250 words. It was super hard but I got there. I wrote about my friends and I jumping off the railway bridge on Saturday.
I tried to use all the sentence styles. My goal was to get 100% and i did get there. I also hit the target which is super good. Another thing that I did do was add paragraphs but I couldn't fit it all on one page.If you like to give me a comment you can and tell me what I need to improve on and fix?
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